DOA: Dead or Alive

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DOA: Dead or Alive
DOA: Dead or Alive (2006)

IMDB rating: 4.90

Plot: A number of fighters are invited to DOA, an invitational martial arts contest. They travel to the tournament island by plane, until they have to jump out mid-flight with parachutes, and then have until sundown to reach the main island to be entered into the tournament. Fighters are then pooled against one another in a knock-out style tournament, with the loser of a battle sent home, and the winner progressing to the subsequent round. The plot revolves around four female fighters who begin as rivals, but subsequently find themselves teaming up against another force.

find and download movie here DOA: Dead or Alive and instant download

Directors: Yuen Corey

Actors: Roberts Eric,Marsden Matthew,White Brian J.,Chou Collin,Kosugi Kane,Boyer Derek,Crewes Martin,Howey Steve,Lin Song,Liu Fang,Action,Adventure,

which dead or alive game?
do you think have the better graphics, 3 or 2 ultimate?
personally, i think 3 is far more beautiful to look at, while 2 ultimate has a far better "flow" to it, for lack of a better word. also not to mention that 3’s environment was superior compared to 2.
ultimately, i think 3 had better visuals while 2 had better flow of gameplay. i mention these two games and not 4 because these two are from the same era. also it isnt a big secret that the graphics for the plays in 4 are the same as doa 2 ultimate with updated lighting and environment graphics. what do you think?


dead or alive four im 13 and i love this game
guinea pig!! | Feb 05, 2009

Problem Child 3: Junior in Love

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Problem Child 3: Junior in Love
Problem Child 3: Junior in Love (1995)

IMDB rating: 2.50

Plot: Michael Oliver has grown up and moved on. Chapter 3 of the Problem Child trilogy features pre-teened Junior in love with a classmate that won’t even notice him, but does notice three other boys who are rivals to Junior. This means war! Junior trashes the three boys, along with Big Ben, and even gives Dr. Peabody a taste of his own medicine at the dentist office where Peabody attempted to give Junior braces and as usual, Ben is oblivious to his son’s madcap tomfooleries.

Directors: Beeman Greg

Actors: Williams Katt,Chapman Justin,Howard Sherman,Edwards Eric,Edwards Eric,Ewing Blake McIver,Pierce Brock,Richardson Jake,Gottfried Gilbert,Warden Jack,Morrow Bruce Ed,Comedy,Family,Fantasy,

On Collins computerization project, was there an incompetent, possibly self-styled, manager terrorising the?
organization ?

How relevant, if at all, are the following criteria ?

<<1.Bias against action: There are always plenty of reasons not to take a decision, reasons to wait for more information, more options, more opinions. But real leaders display a consistent bias for action. People who don

Return, The

Author: jessekirk1965  //  Category: Fără categorie

Return, The
Return, The (2006)

IMDB rating: 4.70

Plot: The restless sales representative of a transport company Joanna Mills (Sarah Michelle Gellar) travels from Saint Louis to Texas in a business trip. She is haunted by violent visions and after meeting her client, she visits her lonely father. On the next morning, she decides to visit La Salle, a small town where she has never been before, but she had recollections of many locations. She lodges in a hotel and later she meets and is befriended by the local widower Terry Stahl, who helps her from an aggression. Her daydreams and nightmares increase and she becomes obsessed for disclosing the truth about her visions of a brutal murder of a woman in a barn. Along her investigation, Joanna gets close to the killer and feels that her life is in danger.

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Directors:

Actors: O’Brien Peter,Scott Adam,Shepard Sam,MacKenzie J.C.,Welch Wally,Ertl Frank,Leland Brad,Smiga Brent,Wilson Robert,Cornwell Peter,Hamby Ben,Murphy Dan,Santiago Harry,Drama,Mystery,Thriller,

Discarding a card in MTG?
I have a little card called Baru, Fist of Krosa.

One of it’s conditions says:
"Discard another card named Baru, Fist of Krosa: Put an X/X green Wurm creature token into play, where X is the number of lands you control."

My question is this…

I have another card that says: During your upkeep you may pay 2 colorless and one Green mana to return a creature card from your graveyard to your hand.

Can I discard another copy of Baru, Fist of Krosa during my upkeep? If so this is a pretty deadly combo as I could keep discarding and paying 3 mana as long as I had it.

I have read the rules and have found no help as to when an ability that requires a discard resolves.

Thanks for your help!

Jumanji

Author: jessekirk1965  //  Category: Fără categorie

Jumanji
Jumanji (1995)

IMDB rating: 6.10

Plot: After being trapped in a jungle board game for 26 years, a Man- Child (Robin Williams) wins his release from the game. But, no sooner has he arrived that he is forced to play again, and this time sets the creatures of the jungle loose on the city. Now it is up to him to stop them.

Directors: Johnston Joe

Actors: Williams Robin,Grier David Alan,,Hyde Jonathan,Pierce Bradley,Hann-Byrd Adam,Handy James,Obray Brandon,Thiedeke Cyrus,Thorup Gary Joseph,Action,Adventure,Comedy,Drama,Family,Fantasy,Romance,

at the end of jumanji…?
at the end of jumanji, alan parrish wins the game. he’s still with sarah whittle. but where were the kids at this point? i dont remember. thank youu


With there parents who still alive
Darkko | Nov 11, 2009

Mad, The

Author: jessekirk1965  //  Category: Fără categorie

Mad, The
Mad, The (2007)

IMDB rating: 5.00

Plot: A horror-thriller in which a doctor and his teenage daughter are terrorized by flesh-eating zombies at a truck stop.

Directors: Kalangis John

Actors: Binkley James,Deslippe Matthew,Flock Evan Charles,Gray Rothaford,Gross Christopher,McPhail Ian,Orr Sean,Price Allan,Rhoades Michael,Scovell Geoff,Wilsher Steve,Zane Billy,Horror,Thriller,

Mad Anthony Cyclocross Race Brings Bike Racing to Detroit …

Cyclists will literally be storming the walls of Historic Fort Wayne in Detroit, with the first edition of the “ Mad Anthony Cyclocross Race ” to be held on the grounds of the fort.

Fiddler on the Roof

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Fiddler on the Roof
Fiddler on the Roof (1971)

IMDB rating: 7.70

Plot: Film version of the stage musical, based on the stories of Sholom Aleichem. Tevye the Milkman is a Jewish peasant in pre-Revolutionary Russia, coping with the day-to-day problems of ’shtetl’ life, his Jewish traditions, his family (wife and daughters), and state-sanctioned pogroms.

Directors: Jewison Norman

Actors: Topol,Frey Leonard,Mann Paul,Glaser Paul Michael,Lovelock Ray,Ruskin Shimen,Scooler Zvee,Zorich Louis,Drama,Family,Musical,

Audition song ideas, anyone?
My Musical Theatre class is doing a Showcase with the Acting and Musical Theatre classes combined. The MT students have to choose 2 of the four possible shows to audition for, and I chose Fiddler on the Roof and Damn Yankees. We’ll be doing one song with CD accompaniment and a cold reading of a couple of scenes. Any ideas for audition songs that would fit both shows (I can sing any female part, but Soprano I or II is best). I know it’s hard to think of a song that fits both (which is why I’m asking the Yahoo community) so any ideas would be greatly appreciated. Thanks :)


Try some of these and see if they work for you

A NEW LIFE… Jekyll and Hyde
A QUIET THING… Flora the Red Menace
A WHOLE NEW WORLD… Aladdin
ARKANSAS… Big river
AS LONG AS HE NEEDS ME.. Oliver
BACK TO BEFORE.. Ragtime
BIG SPENDER… Sweet Charity
BUENOS AIRES… Evita
CABARET.. Cabaret
CASTLE ON A CLOUD… Les Miserables
COLOR OF THE WIND… Pocahonta
DANCE 10, LOOKS 3… A Chorus Line
DIVA’S LAMENT.. Spamalot
EASY TO BE HARD.. Hair
EVERYTHING ELSE.. Next to Normal
FOR GOOD… Wicked
FORGET ABOUT THE BOY.. Thoroughly Modern Millie
GLITTER AND BE GAY … Candide
GROWING UP CATHOLIC.. Nonsense
HE VAS MY BOYFRIEND… The Young Frankenstein
HOME… Beauty and the Beast
I BELIEVE IN LOVE… Hairspray
I GOT RHYTHM… Girl Crazy
JIMMY… Thoroughly Modern Millie
JUST YOU WAIT… My Fair Lady
KEYS .. Passing Strange
LET ME DANCE FOR YOU.. A Chorus Line
LULLABY OF BROADWAY… 42nd Street
MAYBE… Annie
MORE TO THE STORY… Shrek the Musical
NOBODY’S SIDE… Chess
NOONE IS ALONE.. Into the Woods
100 WAYS TO LOSE A MAN.. Wonderful Town
ON MY OWN.. Les Miserables
RAND AVENUE… Flower Drum Song
THE WIZARD AND I… Wicked
SECOND STAR TO THE RIGHT… Peter Pan
THINK OF ME.. Phantom of the Opera
WHAT I DID FOR LOVE… A Chorus Line
YOU;LL NEVER BE ALONE.. A Tale of Two Cities

Good Luck

Tinpanallycat | Nov 20, 2009


Well, you obviously want something that shows off your range and vocal ability, as well as your versatility. Honestly, considering both those shows and their female roles, if you wanted you could choose something from Disney :-) . Anything… Mulan, Beauty and the Beast, if you sell it, you can get it. Not to mention that the sheet music is SOO easy to find… and Disney is AWESOME. break a leg though, whatever you pick
tim | Nov 19, 2009


"On the Steps of the Palace" = into the woods.
Todd | Nov 19, 2009

Living Death

Author: jessekirk1965  //  Category: Fără categorie

Living Death
Living Death (2006)

IMDB rating: 4.00

Plot: The masochist Elizabeth lives a marriage of convenience with the cynical, sadistic and reckless playboy Victor, who is the heir of a huge inheritance including the mansion where they live. She is the lover of Victor’s lawyer and best friend Roman, but she can not divorce Victor since she signed a prenuptial contract that would leave her with only $10,000. Roman plots with Elizabeth to poison Victor with an experimental drug, but it fails and Victor is completely paralyzed without dying. During his autopsy with three medical students, Victor awakes from his comatose status, and totally deranged, he seeks revenge using his torture chamber.

Directors: Berry Erin

Actors: Bryk Greg,Peace Joshua,Foster Neil,Hickox Marc,Sahay Vik,Narang Rajiv,Cordell Christopher,Yorke Troy,Thriller,

modern world history. help!?
16.
The publication of Martin Luther’s Ninety-five Theses (1 point)

* was immediately seen as a threat by local businesses.
* attacked the abuses in the sale of indulgences, beginning the Protestant Reformation.
* was largely ignored until decades after Luther’s death.
* became the central text for Anglicanism.

17.
What was the name of the set of principles that dominated economic thought in the seventeenth century? (1 point)

* commercial capitalism
* consumerism
* speculation
* mercantilism

18.
The Dutch tried to dominate the clove trade by (1 point)

* destroying the crops produced by the English and the Portuguese.
* persuading close growers to grow only flowers and not cloves.
* limiting cultivation of the crop to one island and forcing others to stop the growing and trade of the spice.
* undercutting their competitors by raising the price of Dutch clove.

19.
The Treaty of Tordesillas, signed in 1494, (1 point)

* put an end to the war between Portugal and Turkey.
* established a line of demarcation between territories controlled by Portugal and those controlled by Spain.
* ended the violence between Portuguese and Muslim traders.
* made Portuguese the official language of the Americas.

20.
According to mercantilists, the prosperity of a nation depended on (1 point)

* a large supply of bullion, or gold and silver.
* a healthy flow of coffee coming into the nation.
* conquering new territories and expanding the nation’s intellectual resources.
* finding and maintaining a supply of cheap labor, preferably slaves.

21.
What was the name for the journey of slaves from Africa to America? (1 point)

* the Voyage of Sorrow
* the Bering Crossing
* the Africa-America Run
* the Middle Passage

22.
European rulers and merchants were determined to gain control of the islands of Southeast Asia because (1 point)

* whichever nation controlled these islands controlled the trade route between China and Europe.
* they were vital to launching a military invasion of the mainland.
* the spice trade there was enormously profitable.
* the climate was perfect for bathing.

23.
James I of England believed in the divine right of kings, which is (1 point)

* the belief that a king was granted the wisdom of God upon ascending to the throne, and therefore was faultless.
* the concept that kinds were equal to God, and therefore did not have to live by the laws of the Church.
* the theory that kings alone could know the mind of God, and therefore could determine the future through divination.
* the idea that kings receive their power from God and are responsible only to God.

if u kno any of the answers. not all but some please do help me. its extremely important!

Five Children and It

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Five Children and It
Five Children and It (2004)

IMDB rating: 5.50

Plot: ‘It’ is a Psammead (voiced by Eddie Izzard), an ancient, ugly and irritable sand fairy the children find one day on a secret beach at their uncle’s mansion. It grants them one wish per day, lasting until sunset. But they soon learn it is very hard to think of really sensible wishes, and each one gets them into unexpected difficulties. Magic, the children find, can be as awkward as it is enticing.

Five Children and It

Directors: Stephenson John

Actors: Highmore Freddie,Jennings Alex,Bailey Jonathan,Muggleton Alec,Muggleton Zak,Branagh Kenneth,Pownall Alexander,Izzard Eddie,Serafini Georgio,Sessions John,Fenton Kim,Adventure,Family,Fantasy,

Question about swaddling?
For moms with older babies/children, when did you stop swaddling your baby? My son will be five weeks tomorrow and if he’s not sleeping on my chest (which he only does during the day) he HAS to be swaddled or he gets his arms and hands in his face and just generally squirms too much to fall/stay asleep. I don’t mind swaddling him at all and I’m not in a hurry get him to stop or anything, just kind of wondering how long some of you swaddled for… I’m sure it has to do with the child and when they stop liking it.


my son would always kick out of it when i swaddeled him so i stopped around 4 months
Landon's Momma + baby GIRL! | Dec 19, 2009


I can’t remember exactly, but I just stopped when they didn’t like it anymore. You’ll know because they will be able to get their arms and legs free. Until then if they liked to be swaddled you can continue doing it.
kat | Dec 19, 2009


Our son needed to be swaddled until he was 8 months old. We did try weaning him of it before then but he wanted nothing to do with it.
Noah's Mommy &amp; Marine Wife. | Dec 19, 2009


My kids both started kicking out of the swaddle around 3-4 months old.

Believer, The

Author: jessekirk1965  //  Category: Fără categorie

Believer, The
Believer, The (2001)

IMDB rating: 7.30

Plot: “The Believer” explores a Jewish student’s private journey to understand the meaning of Judaism in his life. Set in New York City, the Plot follows a morally confused young adult struggling with the conflict between his beliefs and his heritage. “The Believer” examines themes of religion, family, and self-loathing. It is a psychological examination into the forces of intolerance, both on the individual and society as a whole.

Directors: Bean Henry

Actors: Fitzgerald Glenn,Zane Billy,Gosling Ryan,Dillahunt Garret,Miles A.D.,Harto Joshua,Eivers Kris,Garland Joel,Strober Dean,Lazarus Judah,Guttman Ronald,Drama,

Believer/Atheist/Agnostic?
…And why?


What’s the question?
Not For Promotional Use | Nov 24, 2009


Acentaurist…

Because I don’t believe centaurs exist…
MIL HOUSE MD | Nov 24, 2009


Atheist – there is no evidence that there is or ever was a God.
firekites | Nov 24, 2009


my iq tests over 10
you be the judge.
**Logic is Logical** | Nov 24, 2009


I have to…or master will beat me
my speEling is purfekt. noobz! | Nov 24, 2009


Agnostic.
Because I feel that at this point in time we don’t have the sufficient information to decide if one religion, if any, is correct.
dKatied | Nov 24, 2009


Man, does Firekite look smoking or what? Sure, it is a cartoon likeness, but dang! Is it the hair? I think its the hair.
huliendin returns | Nov 24, 2009


Yup-undefined. Years of study have led to the conclusion that no one can draw a real conclusion.
locksyth | Nov 24, 2009


Atheist. Lack of evidence.

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
1. You can’t prove that something doesn’t exist, that’s illogical.
2. Therefore, the burden of proof/evidence is on the believers in god.
3. There is no proof/evidence of god.
4. You can decide for yourself which one of these you believe:

a) There is no evidence of god existing , but we cannot prove that he doesn’t exist so we must place him on the "we don’t know list", Since we cannot prove that fairies and dragons aren’t real either, we must also place them on the "We don’t know list". Anything that I make up off the top of my head must also be placed on this list simply because you cannot prove that it doesn’t exist. Therefore there is no such thing as non-existence.

b) Fairies, dragons, unicorns, etc. are regarded as non-existent because there is no indisputable evidence of their existence. God should be labeled non-existent for the very same reason.

You decide which is more logical.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Squeezle | Nov 24, 2009


Atheist
Jillian | Nov 24, 2009


atheist
because
90's grunge girl | Nov 24, 2009


anti-theist
never trust a hippy | Nov 24, 2009


Believer. For I know who I have believed in and I am persuaded that He is able to keep that which I have committed unto Him against that day. :)
AmeliaBedelia | Nov 24, 2009


Believer.

I’m a believer, but not a "knower". I "believe" there is something higher than what can be proven scientifically, but I rely entirely on possibilities, and since there is no absolute proof I am right, I’ve got no reason to proselytize or condemn others.
Us and Them | Nov 24, 2009


Atheist. I chose to not believe the stories of the bible. Without that fairytale, there is no evidence of any god.
tammy b | Nov 24, 2009


Atheist. Why would I believe otherwise? And if I did, why wouldn’t I still pay homage to such entities as Santa Clause, Frosty the Snowman, or Luke Skywalker.
loveface | Nov 24, 2009


Believer. Choose to believe that something or someone holds the reigns of this world we live in.
Nani78 | Nov 24, 2009


Believer

Because through studying science (looking at the world around me), i have come to the conclusion that " this place was created/designed by something)
M3 nace D | Nov 24, 2009


I am Agnostic.
There is no proof that God exists, so I don’t believe in a god.
However I am not going to say there is no way a god can’t exists somewhere, though it is highly unlikely, I can’t prove one doesn’t exist. I think Theists can be as ridiculously adamant as believers in choosing not to consider evidence that may be contrary to their views.
Rupert | Nov 24, 2009


Believer.
Everything. I just can’t not believe. There are many reasons why i believe. I can’t list them all, too many.
lifesbiggestwonder | Nov 24, 2009


Im a Sith….because that leads to power, duh
Fedor's Goat | Nov 24, 2009


your title wearers are trying to be somebody ….be included….be for or against something…its all in the script.
wazzyrobin | Nov 24, 2009


Agnostic atheist. The existence of a god(s) ( as most people define it) is really unknowable. There is however no compelling evidence to believe in a god(s) thus I don’t.
jeffrcal | Nov 24, 2009


Believer
I believe that the Lord Jesus Christ, Son of God, came down and shed his blood for the sinners on earth so that they may enter the gates of heaven. I don’t need science to believe this thank you.
Twizard | Nov 24, 2009


Agnostic Atheist.

Why? Well several reasons. I don’t believe god or gods exist just because some dusty old book tells me to believe something unquestioningly. Another reason, there is no proof that there is a god or gods and that burden of proof rests with the believers, not the unbelievers. Also, *IF* there was or is a god, it has nothing to do with us and we aren’t special in relation to the ENTIRE universe. We are a speck of dirt in comparison to the size of 18 of our solar systems (even more because the mere fact that I put a number down means that the universe is even bigger than that). We evolved by chance and for reasons that we will never know and I don’t intend to investigate the matter any further because there is no proof.
Mr. Popingo | Nov 24, 2009


Acceptance of a supernatural claim tends to promote cooperative social relationships. This communication demonstrates a willingness to accept, without skepticism, the influence of the speaker in a way similar to a child’s acceptance of the influence of a parent. By encouraging this kind of behavior where the most intense social relationships occur it facilitates the lack of skepticism and deters more open minded thinking.

They are christian, Muslim or the other religions depending where they were born simply because they were indoctrinated by their parents as very young children. They will go on to indoctrinate their own children and those will go on to indoctrinate their grandchildren!!

Atheists have the intellect to see through the conditioning and escape into the real world!!

Agnostics have the intellect to see through the conditioning but lack the courage to throw of the conditioning entirely.

Sadly Christians are still held firmly prisoner by the self perpetuating brainwashing!!
Sage | Nov 24, 2009


Atheist

Innocent until proven guilty – God is not real until proven to be real.

So far I have heard no convincing arguments for a religion. They fall mainly into two categories.
1) The point is disproven or argues against science. Science can provide hard evidence and is therefor more valid.
2) The argument collapses without the assumption of a God. Thus the argument fails when used against a non – believer.
Entropy and pain | Nov 24, 2009


Believer in the Lord and Savior Jesus Christ.

Why? I have endured and triumphed over too many things in my life, things that would have made some commit suicide. Though I exercise both reason and logic, logic and reason did not sustain me through those hardships and I certainly didn’t do anything by my own strength. I did and will continue to do all things through Him who strengthens me.
Ang | Nov 24, 2009


hi!

what is space. just think about what exactly it is.. what it is.. i mean imagine u move some object from on place to another. So the area from where u moved it is left empty. if we remove air ect… what remains there. Its space. but whats its contents.. we are talking of something but we do not know what exactly it is.

now, the universe is sitting on space… its all space in which these visible things are moving.
Just imagine who created this all.

whats before big bang… if u u keep on going back in time before big bang u will end u saying it was something. where it came from.

Can u find the starting point of time. even if u find the starting point of time, then if i say what was before that..
u can say u know universe… universe is some xyz no of starts etc… and after that there is only space… just imagine.. what max a human brain can think is that there would be some end of universe.. but even if we say this is the end point… i can always say .. what after that..

That the greatness of the creator for everything.
He has put in everything so perfectly..no science can ever find his limits..

what happens when a person dies… expain what is death.. our body ends.. what about a healty person suddenly dies…without any reason or any disease.

can we make a person live again after 1 hour of his death by just pumping his blood…
so who is doing all that…

when u speak something… have u realize whose voice is it.. u will say its ur.. but who are you exactly… u will say a human body… but human body is made up of xyz no of cells.. so how exacly a cluster of those cells is speaking…

see every think we see or we can not see is very very higly perfect… starting from a very small cell to the universe… and beyond… so we still think its just a Coincidence!!

I am not asking you to have faith on any lords we know… nor to have faith on any holy books (only for the person who doesn’t belive god)… but i am saying praise the creator who created everything so perfectly.. the ultimate creator of evrything…

and if we research a little bit more then we will get to know that aal the religions praise about that ultimate creator.. and they have just given different names to him only.. .

wish u all the best to explore ur life…
Harpreet Singh Saini | Nov 24, 2009


atheist, due to the complete lack of evidence for any deity
Michael | Nov 24, 2009


I am Muslim (I submit my will to God). Because I have met the True Christ whom all the prophets testifed of. By the power of revelation and prophecy is he able to bring out the true words of the Prophets that are hidden within the scriptures- whether it be the Qur’an, Torah, Bible, Gospels not even included in the Bible, Buddha text, Hindu Text, the book of Mormon, any book that contains actual prophecy. With these words that have already been written he has produced a book, by the grace of Allah, that testifies as to who he is and explains all things. His only duty is to reveal to the world the truth and let you decide what you want to do. In Allah’s own due time the Son of Man will reveal himself and truth will come to the world. It fills my heart with gladness to know that the Messiah has come and the world will soon discover the truth and peace shall reign on Earth.

Romeo Must Die

Author: jessekirk1965  //  Category: Fără categorie

Romeo Must Die
Romeo Must Die (2000)

IMDB rating: 5.70

Plot: In this modern day Romeo and Juliet, kung fu action star Jet Li plays Romeo to hip-hop singer, Aaliyah Haughton’s Juliet. Li is an ex-cop investigating the murder of his brother, who had ties with the Chinese mafia in America. Aaliyah plays the daughter of the American mob boss. Neither side approves of their romance, so, obviously, kung fu action ensues, with a soundtrack by Aaliyah.

Directors: Bartkowiak Andrzej

Actors: Li Jet,Washington Isaiah,Wong Russell,DMX,Lindo Delroy,Woodside D.B.,O Henry,Lee Jonkit,Ballerini Edoardo,Anderson Anthony,Harrison Matthew,Chen Terry,Lowe Derek,Wong Ronin,Action,Crime,Drama,Thriller,

truth be told..what do you think…2 poems..?

I’m falling, falling.

I’m falling fast…

Hold me high

Because once I’m gone I’ll be too hard to grasp

The weight of this world is killing me

It’s pulling me down under the ground so unseen

Far under the grass farther than it seems

And now it’s doing nothing but suffocating me

What is that coming from the sky

Is it tears from the one the only God’s eyes

The tears so heavy I feel as if I’ve drowned

Help me soon

Or soon I will become hell bound

Catch me, hurry

Oh please, please, please

Nothing will be left of me for you to see

The pain is too hard it hurts so bad

Even though I’ve had everything I could have ever had

Different thoughts run through my head

Of everything I’ve ever left unsaid

I feel the hand it clasp my wrist

I think to myself well if you insist

I feel the pressure pulling me up so hard

But maybe this time I’ve taken it too far

I open my eyes as I hear the ground break

My breath begins to come out in an even pace

I wait for my heart to slow down, for Goodness sake
Oh Yes there it goes

Finally at last…

This nightmare becomes another part of my past..

Another Romeo and Juliet….

Drowning in his misery

He see’s himself as somewhat of a mystery

He’s not good enough for her

He knows by far

So he keeps drawing back

Into the drugs and alcohol

afraid to lose his heart

Tears are falling from her face

She see’s him as better

And never thought of him as a disgrace

I’m not good enough for him

She cries out..

But her heart is filled with her very own self doubt

Love is gone away from here

Like a cloud that drowns their tears

They need each other

And it’ll never become clear

As Hatred words fill their ears

While they lie in their unblissful fears

They’re only love is now

their only hate

Seeping lower he can’t catch up

Down down he falls

and can’t realize when enough is enough

he’s slowly killing himself

and the truth will be unknown forever

he needs her here now more sooner than later

Why oh why can’t this love be true

She screams I love you

But it’s too late

His pictures and memories are what she now must face

She can’t take it so on her bed she laid

She said goodbye to everyone

Whose life’s she may have changed

As she tells them she’ll see them all again one day

And Suddeny from the sky pours the rain

Yet another couple died today

Love is gone away from here

Like a cloud that drowns their tears

They need each other

And it’ll never become clear

As Hatred words fill their ears

While they lie in their unblissful fears

They’re only love is now

their only hate


Not too bad! Work on being more succinct, really pack a punch with every single word. I think the first one was the best, try to avoid so much prose.

| Oct 14, 2009


You are a good poet dear
amy | Oct 14, 2009


Your second was really good, but ended in such a downer.
Concresence @ the end of time | Oct 14, 2009


You write really good. I liked the second one more than the first though. Your expressions are really good and (at least I think so) best expressed in the simple words you have used. The ending was not a downer, although I can say it was a bit predictable (see the lyrics of the song "Whisky Lullaby" by Brad Paisley and Allison Krauss. Still I think it is really good. Keep it up.
Animefaniac | Oct 14, 2009


These writes are a wonderful insight of what a person can feel when in a situation such as this.

It does leave at a hinderance of pain and bitterness.

All in all, you expressed the emotion in detail.

Very heartfelt.
TheUnrealMe | Oct 14, 2009